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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-02-09 09:04 AM

you wore glances on your perfume
like does eyes strumming clouds
making those shadows one remembers
when they look back wondering

I enjoyed the gravel of your lawn
and how you walked on tiptoes
so if you decided to lose balance
there would be an excuse to explore

how your sighs fit within my tattoos
and how if our heads were together
we might both enjoy losing our minds
not with an agenda or directions

but more accidental like love songs

__________

daark

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2011-02-09 09:06 AM

any doe...caught in those headlights would never be the same...

LOL

you always make me smile, Dark One~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-02-09 09:12 AM

thanks naughty daughter...you smile me always

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-02-09 09:28 AM

Love to see D.S. has posted, I know I am in for a treat. Thanks for sharing your considerable gifts with us.

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-02-09 10:02 AM

Awesomeness with a capital a...lots of great lines in this one...enjoyed it much!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-02-09 10:06 AM

JP...thanks amigo...

______________

ms faith, thank so much ms

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2011-02-09 12:24 PM

you had me from your opening lines and it just got better thereafter...lots of amazing imagery...a sheer pleasure to read

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2011-02-09 12:32 PM

steavenr..thanks guy...you bless me with your reads.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2011-02-09 12:59 PM

Exquisite - your talent used at its very best. Loved it, especially the doe eyes.

Owl

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2011-02-09 01:32 PM

thanks lady Owl

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2011-02-09 10:17 PM

Love that song you're singing, dude~

Love the way you walk, love the way you talk, etc etc...

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2011-02-10 06:47 AM

babyblue...and I love your eyes...thanks babe

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2011-02-27 02:15 PM

quote:
how your sighs fit within my tattoos
and how if our heads were together
we might both enjoy losing our minds
not with an agenda or directions

but more accidental like love songs

How lovely! This makes me want to skip down the road like a little girl

Tenderly inspiring.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2011-02-28 07:51 AM

ms mar, thanks lady friend..you make me smile always

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (02-28-2011 09:12 AM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

14 posted 2011-03-01 06:43 AM

"and how if our heads were together
we might both enjoy losing our minds
not with an agenda or directions"

sounds sweet to me

M

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

15 posted 2011-03-01 07:48 AM

ms MMs...you always make me grin wickedly, thanks lady

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