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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. This kiss And the next And the next And the next Something Has happened White hair In the mirror Perhaps Some doctor Has told her Beauty is not forever Or a priest reciting Dust to dust Looked her in the eye Through The window I can see The sky is bruised And again there are clouds Heralding the coming Of another layer of snow Ah well Whatever the reason It’s good to be warm On a night like this Close the door And come inside . |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Yes indeed, close that door. Great exercise in the realization of suddenly finding out that the years has left their mark. Nice work. ~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this is full of some great lines...very nicely done! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
'Tis such a lesson being in animal form. Good work here. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Through The window I can see The sky is bruised" ...nicely done...perception, reality...and the very blurry line between them...nicely done |
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