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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA 
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Written July 22,2007 You try and to find love A one so deep That no one can steal That one love away You look for so long But it never comes And the deeper your Loneliness and depression comes The deeper the depression The deeper the sadness goes To the point You just want to give up hope Deeper and Deeper Year after Year You get sick of looking You get sick of trying So failure after failure Deep down inside Your heart turns cold And goes from red to black Deeper and deeper your love pulls back Until all that is in your heart Is nothing but hate and pain And all you feel is emptiness inside Then after awhile You feel nothing When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, it's a Catch-22, isn't it? Can't seem to live with 'em and can't seem to live without 'em. ~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~ |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
Jerry, thank you for the comment. LOL It seems like that. Somedays I am glad I don't have a man around and then some days I just feel alone. When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very beautifully expressed...i can feel the pain behind the words...it's sad...some people never find what they're looking for There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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