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life outside my box
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life outside my box |
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thedonald New Member
since 2011-02-06
Posts 2 |
I stay inside my box Unwilling to venture out Walls are closing in My view is so confined Addicted to routine getting high on the usual world view is narrow all happenings are in my box Stepping out. So much to see To study Sensory overload. Social Anxiety Welcome to my world |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep, it's tough out there. Welcome to the Blue Pages! Please check your email for a very special PiP greeting! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Welcome to the Blue Pages, thedonald. There are more people living inside the box that many realize. Yep, the percentage I would imagine would be high. Good poem to start off with. ~ Some people are like a Slinky-not really good for anything, but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
welcome...I liked this...can truly understand where you are coming from in this write...definitely will be looking for more |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to PIP Thanks for sharing the honesty in this writing. Eric in a relationship the me becomes we. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this. -Juju |
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thedonald New Member
since 2011-02-06
Posts 2 |
Thank you everyone for your supportive comments. I am truly touched and feel a lot better about posting my first poem :-) |
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