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The Girls |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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You shot your love across my heart I felt you hot upon the girls they imagined cleaving in a gown of pearls LGR2/5/11 |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
now that's cleverly and skillfully writtten...kudos, Lori There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh yeah. Well written ~ and I smiled. A |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
Fantastic bit of misdirection. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Just across well that's interesting. Great twist there kiddo! Like it very very much! Eric |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You play with words so well.  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
 ...smiles, and of course, applause |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This is what I'm talking about. Your poems lately. different. Uniquely YOU. I've been wanting to comment here since you put it up, but as you know I have been . . . er . . . disposed. ~ Some people are like a Slinky-not really good for anything, but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks everybody for your surprising response to this poem. I'm relieved to see it this well recieved. Thanks again for supporting my effots. Lori |
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