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nature's work |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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the gnarled oak is old but sturdy still standing proud inspite of everything the crisp green ferns line the roadside dancing in the breeze a lone beer bottle paper bag over it's neck leans against the brush all is quiet except for the wind and the whoosh of tires on gravel when an occasional car passes by the river is glistening and gray the dock empty there is a kind of calmness inspite of natures activity where much is taking place undetected by the naked eye There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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paderewski Member
since 2011-02-04
Posts 287Louisiana, USA |
This is just beautiful. Poetry at its best. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Welcome to PIP. I hope you enjoy it here. Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. I'm really honored by them. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You can't miss - lovely lady, lovely poetry... it all works! |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you so much, Karilea. You don't know how good that makes me feel! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
There's something about the old oak tree with the wind blowing through it's outstreached limbs. Thanks for sharing this nice piece. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you for stopping by to read my poem. I appreciate your wonderful words. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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