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declaration of love |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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oh little trembling bee i am finely tuned in (to your wavelength) and turned on by your swaying body thus i announce my desire little bee my heart racing at your name's mention pale faced and weak in the knees (when you're near) i love your sweet glances with all the chances we are taking while trying to disguise our inclination toward one another oh my little honey bee you seem to stare so curiously you're my soul's happiness and it's torment supreme oh little trembling bee- hover over me There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
A very lovely poem indeed enjoyed reading your work. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I love this. This is one of the things I wish I could do more of, animate my subjects imaginatively with alternative persona's, like you have done here, rather than writing from a human perspective all the time. Whenever I see something unique to my eyes it causes no small awe and delight. Thank you for the wonderful read! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms faith...a pleasure to feel the buzz of erotica in this one |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
a pleasure to read this lighthearted piece  |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you all so much for the wonderful response to my poem. You've made my day and it's barely started. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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