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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
often…I find myself in thought-showers and often…I cannot explain the memories than meander through the corridors of forgetfulness often…I shudder in the wintry winds of solitude and often…I cannot refrain from caring if I can concur whether things that are were really so often…I traipse through soft-lit fissures of solace and often…I cannot detain the soul-chains that bind my heart like the tethers of a slave fast-bound often…I wander down the pathway of selfishness and often…I find again the pain that faces off in silent paces like enemies in raging anger duel often…I sit alone…knowing that often… I am |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very profound and powerful poem...i loved how you ended it...great work as usual  There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Somewhat existentialist in its makeup is this one, steavenr. A great many question and observations to finally, in the end, come to the conclusion that you are alone. ~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A beautiful Steaven-poem! I read it twice because I couldn't let it go. Thinking, for me, is an exciting past-time. I have written a poem called Thinking. It isn't anything like this beautiful one. Mine is jagged and raw, but I will post it soon. It is probably a repost. Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Faith, you are always overly kind...this time is no exception...thank you so much Jerry, keen observation...I think this is my take on "I think, therefore I am" ...thanks for the candid comments Owl, thank you...I certainly appreciate that...will definitely be looking forward to reading that |
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