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Open Poetry #47
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Elric
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since 2010-08-24
Posts 43
southbend, WA
0 posted 2011-01-06 05:41 PM


A single cookie is left in the jar.

Alone, broken, and un-wanted.

He stays in the dark jar always.

Wondering what happened to his friends.

Until more come along.

Evenually they will all leave him aswell.

But he will remain forever

Alone, broken, and un-wanted.

Always wondering why he must remain.
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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2011-01-06 06:12 PM

I went and looked in my jar, and your right, there is one broken unwanted cookie in there.

I crumbled him up and spread him on my Hot Fudge Sundae

you can tell I liked your poem
DrinaLove
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since 2010-12-23
Posts 30
California
2 posted 2011-01-06 09:16 PM

Why is the cookie a he? R cupcakes the she? Lol I loved it
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2011-01-06 09:28 PM

I could see between his biscuits
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