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bouquet of words (inspired by katahdin)
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bouquet of words (inspired by katahdin) |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
bouquet of words in verbal display like orchids and calla lilies on a bright, summer day nectar-drenched petals in full parade so macy-like, so tournament of roses’ blooms in a game of charade speaking soft whispers to the scent of the soul exorcising thought-blooms hand-written like melancholy labels that address the whole of the being of sights, smells and even sounds that nature brings with each supernal symphony brought to earth’s misery in which life abounds a spray of appreciation for the verbiage of delight bringing ecstasy and fantasy and reality by the mere garland of their ability and might which by simple arrangement touch the heart and by subtle agreement convince the mind that the soul can be satisfied by their well-played part of a bouquet of words in a verbal display |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hmmmm some great lines steavenr |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
my, my sir...from you...the uncontested master of cool phrasing...I am not only delighted, but humbled...thank you |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
steavenr, your bouquet of words are a delight and an inspiration. Enjoyed it very much. Came back to look at things and realized instead of putting your name in the beginning of the comments I put We, and I have no idea where that came from. ~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat (01-27-2011 10:32 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like it very much and this is a fine example of such a bouquet. Many examples of opportunities expressed in this Steaven....Let the words flow when it suits the creator's mind. Loved it! Eric Forget the Psychiatrists they just find out all about you and sell you back to yourself! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Just Beautiful! I'll take a bouquet of words from you anyday! Glad that I could be an inspiration for you and thanks for letting me know. Kat >^..^< |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
Very beautifully written. I loved the imagery. I like it when I can picture poems in my head.  When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
wow...this is awesome...so unique and beautifully written...kudos to you!!! faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your writing is so fine, love this bouquet and entire array of emtions. Nicely done, steavenr~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Jerry, ‘We’ appreciate your comments (whomever the we may be) Eric, thanks for the ‘opportunities’ …it is always good when the words flow…then, I need not think…something I like to do a lotKat, a bouquet for your inspirations and a handful of thanks for the gracious comments Doc Angel, then we share the imagery in the mind thing…love those mental picture poems myself…thank you Faith, thank you…you are far too kind, your words…"awesome, unique, and beautiful"…I should be using the wow! Blues…your comments always are appreciated, but this time I do have a question…are ‘emtions’ related to ‘exemptions’ or ‘pre-emptions’ or is it that old game of Cowboys & ‘Emtions’ ...sorry, couldn't resist |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm alwys leavng ot leters or etire words altogethe. it's my tradmark doncha kno!! Oh me oh my where's my spell checker when I need it. Very funny steavenr~ fill in the blanks would you!! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Came back for another bouquet. Kat >^..^< |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Blues, hank yu...I hink ...smiles... Kat, the flower shoppe should always be open...and of course, you will always be welcome |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Steaven-Sweet! I don't know what I could add to the above comments, they say it all so I'll just DITTO! Lori |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful bouquet, Steavenr. Ida |
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