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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Do we give life when we love? Do we take life when we don't? Ankh, word, image, life Gold, liquid of gods Skin of gods Stolen for gods? Stolen to give to other gods? I offer you, A lotus A dawn A rebirth Who is your god? Are you your god? Stolen, Given, Hushed Ankh, word, image, life. ----------- E.M.L. [This message has been edited by ebonygirl (01-17-2012 01:25 PM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very heavy thought in your write. What are the answers?? ________________________________ “I offer you, A lotus A dawn A rebirth Ankh, word, image, life.” ________________________________ Something to think about. Very nice writing Ms. E. Enjoyed the read. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
MS E..pleasing presentation ms |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Yes, JL, heavy stuff. Searching for answers. Thank you, Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, we give life when we love, of course we do. Therefore when we don't love we are denying life. It isn't any more complicated that that, is it, Ms E? ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thanks Dark, Ms. E |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Smiling at you JP, not complicated at all. Thank you, Ms. E |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
oooh...a mantra~ loved this, Ms. E~~~~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Bel, Smiles, Ms. E |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like the thought paths you take me on! *S* |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Those paths sometimes make me run off the road. Thank you Suthern, Ms. E |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Ankh=eternal life. Will we eventually earn it? Perhaps we need to learn what to do with it first. Ida |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"Do we give life when we love?" It sure feels like it. doesn't it? Nice ponderings. Michael |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I offer you, A lotus A dawn A rebirth And oh what gifts those are; love this Ms E. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have given us a moment of meditation, dear Ebonygirl! Your offer is absolutely precious and love-scented. Love IS, we are constantly immersed in Love, we can absorb it and share it, it regenerates constantly, it never ever dries out. It is life-giving yes, the very Source of it. It is important to be aware of this. Not giving it consciously deprives us of the greatest pleasure, but we can't "take" it or "kill" it, because it IS.... just my thoughts. Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
 Very good poem...built around a good theme.. You poetry is a joy to read. |
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