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Mon Cherie
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Land of Never-ending Summers

0 posted 2012-01-16 06:43 PM


Thick white cotton candies
Float amidst baby blues
Crisp fragrance of new books
A brand new pair of shoes

Pretty stars that twinkle
On cloak of midnight blue
A walk amongst flowers
That bloom for me and you

The fresh breeze that ruffles
Hair as it gently blew
The glorious sun shining
On lazy afternoons

Many pretty dresses
Aroma of perfume
Beautiful love ballads
All sung in perfect tune

Cool air on winter's morn
Misty breath that we blew
Cold hands on warm cheeks laid
Lest the tips should turn blue

You ask me "is this all?"
I really have no clue
These are only some things
I really love to do


_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-01-16 06:56 PM


Thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Liked the concise, metered lines. Loved the rhyming. Best of all I liked the whimsical happiness I detected throughout.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

ebonygirl
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2 posted 2012-01-16 10:57 PM


Enjoyed your poem.
Ms. E

Mon Cherie
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3 posted 2012-01-18 06:51 PM


Thanks, Jerry and Ms. E... ^_^
EmmaRose
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4 posted 2012-01-25 10:14 AM


Pretty poetry
always makes me smile

Mon Cherie
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5 posted 2012-02-05 07:01 PM


Thank you, EmmaRose. ^_^
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