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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-01-15 06:45 AM

I spoke your name aloud,
With gladness in my heart;
Your name found an echo,
And brought it back to me.

I spoke your name softly,
With all the love I have;
Your name stayed inside me,
Never to leave again.

I spoke your name to you,
You smiled that smile I love;
You spoke my name to me,
And now two names are one.

©January 14, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2012-01-15 07:36 AM

Jerry
Sell this to Hallmark.
It is far better that what I read in their cards.

Perhaps for Valentine card?

enjoyed

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-01-15 08:19 AM

Thanks Ice. Jeez, I haven't bought a Hallmark card in . . . Can't remember when. I appreciate the thought, buddy.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-01-15 09:08 AM

That would make a great Valentine for your lady Jerry! I'm sure she'd love it. Good job my friend

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-01-15 09:18 AM

Thank you Lori, I think it just might.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2012-01-15 10:45 AM

There is no more beautiful love sound than to hear my name from someone's lips.

Sweet

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

6 posted 2012-01-15 10:46 AM

There is a great, great deal of power in a person's name. Using it softly, and gently, and with love is one of the greatest gifts.

(how many times can I say the word 'great' in one reply? geeze use your words, nicole)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2012-01-15 10:59 AM

Haha! Nicole, you were only trying to make a point so even a dim-witted poet such as myself would understand it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-01-15 11:00 AM

EmmaRose, you are absolutely correct. To hear ones name, especially from a loved one is special. Thank you for your continued support.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

9 posted 2012-01-15 11:06 AM

pshh... hardly dim-witted; you sir, could run circles around me, I'm sure of it.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2012-01-15 11:06 AM

This is truly delightful, dear Jerry! You caught the magic that the name of the beloved holds.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

11 posted 2012-01-15 11:09 AM

Ah, that is sweet of you, Margherita. Thank you so much for visiting my poetry like you do.

<><>

Nicole, I can tell you haven't been around me much, huh?

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

twistedpup
Member

since 2011-02-25

Posts 115

12 posted 2012-01-15 02:09 PM

This was very sweet.
Well written, like i read in some of your other feedback, it has the makings of a cute valentines day card.

Yes it is nice to hear your name spoken by some one who loves you and you love them in return.

Well done.

*hugs*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

13 posted 2012-01-15 02:10 PM

Hi, twistedpup! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

14 posted 2012-01-15 07:37 PM

a name on a lover's tongue...yeah ~~~sweet stuff~~~ <3

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

15 posted 2012-01-15 07:40 PM

Ain't nuttin' like it, Baby Girl, to hear your name whispered in your ear . . . Ohhhhh . . . . Thanks, you hear!?

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

16 posted 2012-01-15 07:46 PM

Now this sings...
Nice poetry, Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

17 posted 2012-01-15 08:28 PM

That is nice of you, JL, thank you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

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