Open Poetry #47 |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA ![]() |
prove me weak or prove me strong it will not matter once i'm gone prove me right or prove me wrong don't wait to love me 'till i'm gone There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Laying down the gauntlet, are ye, M'Lady? Don't speak to me as a cur, Don't mince your words, don't slur. I know your strength, yes I do, Faith, your name like French fondue. When you're right you are right, Just ask me, your one true knight. I speak softly in your ear, What I whisper brings you cheer. ~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die. ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
wow...you just blew me away with that one...you're awesome, JerryPat ![]() There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good point. I really enjoyed the read. Eric Forget the Psychiatrists they just find out all about you and sell you back to yourself! |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thanks much, Eric! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
excellent commentary on living life...are you available for eulogies? :} |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
thanks much...eulogies? well, i've only written one...Ha! i just posted it. ![]() There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lorraine Deane New Member
since 2011-01-29
Posts 5South Australia |
Too true. Short but very sweet. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Right to the point, faith. Enjoyed. Ida |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I totally agree, Faith. M |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Welcome aboard Lorraine...thank you and M and Ida for your lovely responses ![]() There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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