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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-01-11 06:24 AM



you said you guessed you knew all along
that you could walk around the parking lot
with mary or jim, perhaps a dozen times
but when you got back, it would be the same

and I would tell you about squirting gum
and that off white paint for your walls
that you said is too thick for brushing
then you giggle about finger painting

and you would say you were distracted again
trying to measure your wrist and imagine
the hat size of the action figure uniform
and you hated sewing on buttons or zipper

so he might attend your boxer rebellion hatless


____________

daark

juztaposing the current political spatter and more important things like squirt gum and action figures

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Nicole
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1 posted 2012-01-11 06:44 AM


Squirt gum and action figures are much more fun than politics.  Maybe they don't have enough toys to play with?
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2012-01-11 06:53 AM


Ms Nicole...I suspect you are right...or perhaps not the right ones..thanks ms
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2012-01-11 08:20 AM


You do soapbox like nobody else.  Your irreverence is delightful


Lori

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2012-01-11 08:21 AM


Ms L...thank you lady
Sunshine
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5 posted 2012-01-11 11:21 AM


Waxing the politicos, are you?

And good job at that!




Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2012-01-11 11:28 AM


Sweetsun...they need to be wacked..oh you said waxed huh...thanks babe
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
7 posted 2012-01-14 04:19 AM


No one does this like you and I like how you done it like you did done did it.
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2012-01-14 08:20 AM


ms Ali-san, thanks babe
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