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Open Poetry #47

A bowl of Rice

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2011-01-26 06:08 PM

with some carrots
spinach and some pepper.
That could fill your belly
yet you want to add more
fine. Some onions, green
and red bell peppers for
your tongue. Yet You say not
done. Ok add some corn
and some gravy that should
be well. But your saying
that's not well enough...
then I'll slice some chicken
spread some spice if it
will satisfy ya. What else
will you need with this dish?
Well why don't I put some
love on top, yours and mine
then maybe we both can get
our fill. But you won't be
satisfied since you'll come
back for more.
Yet it looks to me that your
fine with second helpings.
Well I'm fine with that too
since
this love is SPECIALLY for
You.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

1 posted 2011-02-05 02:12 PM

This is beautifully written. I want me a bowl of that rice. I truly enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

2 posted 2011-02-05 05:25 PM

Thank you Doctors Angel32 for the commetn glad you enjoyed it. I was hungry when i wrote this.

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