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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-01-10 07:28 AM

rummage intensely
into your bottomless
hover above the yawn
put there to conceal
what you need to find
sink into it, below yawn
and seek out integrity
and truth buried deep
your integrity and truth
the whole sum of you
recognize and accept
allow the real you to
mingle with your soul
soul we all have even
though aren't religious
inner spirits is our id
making contact with
your bottomless gives
you sincerity and gold
as you come away from
the yawn with new-found
sets of thought principle
you are now more ready
for the everyday zingers
which attack and sting
you have armor anew
for you have rummaged
intensely and found the
complete and bolder you

©January 6, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-01-10 08:10 AM

quote:
inner spirits is our id
making contact with
your bottomless gives
you sincerity and gold

Wonderful thought, dear Jerry! Indeed it is a question of awareness.

Most beautifully rendered reflections. Yawn is a constant threat and shouldn't find us weak.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-01-10 08:46 AM

Loved how you dissected those lines, Margherita. Thank you as always.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-01-10 01:20 PM

I like your depth here and food for thought...

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-01-10 01:22 PM

Thank you Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2012-01-10 03:21 PM

"as you come away from
the yawn with new-found
sets of thought principle
you are now more ready
for the everyday zingers"

So true.
Great write, Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-01-10 03:25 PM

Thanks, JL. It's a never-ending learning process.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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