Open Poetry #47 |
Asthma |
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Asthma It is scary to struggle for air Each breath a battle. Fighting to inhale. Wheezing Trying not … (Oh God!) … not to panic While being so damn scared. Crying just makes it worse, you know (do not cry - just don’t cry!) Be calm. Calm. Take time to relax and take slow shallow breaths. Try not to be afraid and just remain calm. - Alison |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Alison, you have described an asthma attack vividly - both my hubby & I were asthmatics as children & our daughter. So frightening to see your child struggling for air & the panic on their face (thank god she has also grown out of it like us) ~hugs~ to you sweetie. Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
My oldest daughter had asthma as I child so I understand this completely. Hope you are feeling better. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
REALLY sorry to hear you have to deal with that particular issue! take good care of you!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sweet Alison, I felt constricted while reading your poem. You conveyed the agony of those moments powerfully. I am so sorry to hear this. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Darn! You almost made my eyes water... Heart-wrenching. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Ali-san..glad you are ok...sent you a box of cigars to celebrate. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-13-2012 05:42 AM).] |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you all. Asthma is ... well, this was the worst attack I have had and it was pretty scarey. No more hauling wood when the temp is -35. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Hauling wood with a temperature of -35 C°? Gosh, that is unimaginable!! I left my beloved Switzerland because I couldn't tolerate the low temperatures of - 20 C°, it felt horrible it was as if my heart had cramps and I felt unable to breathe. But I adore Winter and snow and ice ... and I miss it all. May you find the right healing method and may you never again experience such frightening moments. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahh, this reminds me of my father and his battle with emphysema. Calm being the key word, when you're struggling to breath, sometimes there is no calm... sending hugs! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I ached for you with every word, dear friend... I've never had asthma, but have had whooping cough and pneumonia and both have given me a glimpse of the desperation and burning lungs and face-your-Maker-fear that comes from being unable to draw a breath! I hope you don't face another attack so severe... take care of you... you are treasured. *S* |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey my three beautiful lady friend ... Thank you from the bottom of my pasta loving heart - sitting her sucking down pseudo spaghetti and thinking how lucky I am to have each of you in my life, xoxoxo A |
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mvvenkataraman Member
since 2011-11-12
Posts 72India |
Dear Alison, Indeed your poem is fine As it describes asthma And all its complications Really it explains finely You have also given remedy Which let a soul follow I pray for those afflicted May God help them bear Yours prayerfully, mvvenkataraman |
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mvvenkataraman Member
since 2011-11-12
Posts 72India |
Dear Alison, Indeed your poem is fine As it describes asthma And its complications Really it explains finely You have also given remedy Which let a soul follow I pray for those afflicted May God help them bear Yours prayerfully, mvvenkataraman |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Alison, I am so sorry to hear of your latest and scariest asthma attack. I was holding my breath while reading it - only realised when I finished reading it. I don't know how it feels from my own experience as I am never sick, and have never had, nor seen an asthma attack, but your poem took me there. Glad you are being woman-wise about its cause! Relieved smiles and hugs Owl |
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