Open Poetry #47 |
Arcadia |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. People die You I Whoever Unknown to us Is next in line The sun Rises over the sea A mountain or a thing Equally to some pedestrian And no one comments In their reverie Where is Harry? . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This touches me quite intensely. Beautiful and poignant. Margherita |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I don't know how to respond to this one, other than I feel inadequate when it comes to blindness and invisibilty. They often feel interchangeable. Interesting trafficing, here...and very somber. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you both for reading and comments John . |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"And no one comments..." This line hit me in my chest. Ms. E |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this is one of those poems you read that touch you but you're not sure how to comment on it - the truth of it is what touched me - well penned. Love is the life of the soul... |
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