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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-01-05 07:51 AM



you made those swallow sounds early
when your guard was still in the bag
under the bed and you wore unexpected
unaware of how skimpy it was really

when you had nearly nothing else on
and your vulnerable had been opened
just far enough to expose your sighs
like you were dressed just to be touched

there was laughter with giggle edges
so you didn't have to talk about her
that woman of you that you recognized
by the music she was dancing nude to

as you looked away with your eyes closed

____________

daark


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bel1e
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1 posted 2012-01-05 07:54 AM


G U L P

~*~*~ LOL~*~ great dark stuff dark daddy~*~

XOXO

             

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2012-01-05 07:55 AM


babyBel1e...that sound you make...sinful..
thanks lady

Nicole
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3 posted 2012-01-05 08:53 AM


Do swallows sing, early in the morning?  /smile  I like this, it's dreamy.
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2012-01-05 08:55 AM


Ms Nicole...I suspect they do if their eyes are closed...thanks ms
ebonygirl
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5 posted 2012-01-06 02:31 AM


"dressed to be touched " a brushed touch can be more ...
Enjoyed your poem,
Ms. E

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2012-01-06 07:16 AM


ms E...thank you lady


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