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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-01-04 07:06 AM

I hold nothing back from you
riptides of black as sin secrets
I bequeath unto you with love
because you are my soul mate
on uncertain cloudy, wet days
or sunshine bright I am yours
we are bound together as one
because of you I feel as a man
I've a spell that binds my heart
your words are in tune with me
you understand me and I, you
I press my lips upon your kiss
our burdens are now our gentle
we steal time for our grappling
continuing to tell all our secrets
sometimes our bodies do quake
deep inside our dark insecurities
cautiously sigh out breath smiles
I clutch and grasp your identity
reacting to your breath so sweet
I feel your ambiance trespassing
filling my body and my very soul
my sweetheart you're in all of me
our surreptitious meetings of lust
back and forth the power of desire
exploding and shuddering delight
in our hush-hush meetings we do
you have given me more than any
and you say you need my love too
I understand about the other love
I do, I truly do; even so it is hard
when my thoughts take me there
where they should never, ever be
so here we are in limbo together
taking from each other our goal
in this new year our love will last

©January 1, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (01-04-2012 07:59 AM).]

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

1 posted 2012-01-04 07:13 AM

another breathtakingly beautiful write - loved this JerryPat! ~hugs~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

2 posted 2012-01-04 07:38 AM

the passion in this swept me away~*~

favorite line:

quote:
I've a spell that binds my heart

& it's what makes you a poet~~ niiiice.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-01-04 08:03 AM

Thank you, tracie66, for the hug, it was needed this morning. I appreciate your kind words.

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Your comments gave me much pleasure, bel1e, and I wholeheartedly thank you for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2012-01-04 11:38 AM

Beautiful Jerry, best wishes for you and your love

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2012-01-04 11:41 AM

I'll take those best wishes, Lori, and thank you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

6 posted 2012-01-04 12:26 PM

I had to go back to work from being on vacation and it stinks, because I don't get to read as much poetry as I'd like...

This is such a dance of different emotions and the give and take of devotion underlying it all. I love this

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2012-01-04 12:59 PM

Yeah, Nicole, it is going back to work for a lot of people. Thank you for being here, I know it is difficult to find the time.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2012-01-04 02:27 PM

Very captivating, dear Jerry. You quiver with love and with love's emotions whose ripples expand and touch the whole of your life.

Great work!

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2012-01-04 02:35 PM

You always know what to say to make me feel good. Thank you for that, Margherita.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2012-01-04 03:39 PM

"I clutch and grasp your identity
reacting to your breath so sweet
I feel your ambiance trespassing
filling my body and my very soul
my sweetheart you're in all of me"

Wow...
Did I say Wow yet?
Man, this is true art. Love-art in poetry.
This is beautiful, Mr.
→

←
Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

11 posted 2012-01-04 03:41 PM

JL, many thanks go out to you for these comments. I know that "thank you" is what we all say, but I mean it, your comments made my day.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

12 posted 2012-01-06 10:19 PM

I really enjoyed your poem JP.
So you're really in love, sigh.
Congrats,
Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

13 posted 2012-01-06 11:02 PM

Yes, Ms E., I am really in love. I heard that sigh all the way down here in the swamp.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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