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Silken Essence
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Silken Essence |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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from that moment that moment of anticipated excitement when our bodies come together and our lips slowly melt in silken essence my soul radiates blooms of mellifluous notes as my heart pounds like the ocean crashing on the shore from that moment that moment filled with anticipation and excitement I'm transported into a world of silken essence we slowly blend into one and as I inhale the soft elixir that you produce with every movement for a time we are the alchemists pure blend of ecstasy Love is the life of the soul... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely in its sensuousness, dear Tracie Maree. Your words conveyed most beautiful blending of hearts. Margherita  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Margherita as usual you delight me with your lovely comments and I thank you for reading and I'm pleased you enjoyed  Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe — W. E. Channing |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Silken essence. Such moments to slip into when the night is tender and arm hold all the stars of ones heart. Lovely.  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Klassy Lassy - thanks for your lovely reply, I'm pleased that you enjoyed this. Love is the life of the soul... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
When you hear, and feel the sweet "mellifluous notes" It is probably too late to turn back from the spell of "silken essence" But who would want to anyway? enjoyed, Tracie...warmed me right up..considering it is 0 degrees outside, that is an accomplishment. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
This is lovely; a moment to fight the cold cold outside. Who needs a fire? Very nice |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Ice & Nicole - happy to have warmed you both and I thank both of you for your kind comments Love is the life of the soul... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"Inhale me," is a poem written by Lori, and your poem carried the image in my thoughts a little further. Beautiful and moving is these lines of love and love-making. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi JerryPat I'm so glad you enjoyed this & I've just read & commented on Lori's "Inhale Me" thanks for sending me that way as I enjoyed her write.Love is the life of the soul... |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
how lovely is that! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, I'm happy you read "Inhale Me," tracie66. It is a profound piece of work. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful write, my friend. Your best so far to me. j. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"as my heart pounds like the ocean crashing on the shore from that moment that moment filled with anticipation and excitement I'm transported into a world of silken essence" These are sentiments that warm the heart and please the essence of human emotion. Words, touch, and thought combined on a weaving loom producing your Silken Essence. Very nice writing tracie66. Enjoyed the read. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Baby Girl, Jimmy, J & JL you have all made my day, your comments I truly appreciate very much Love is the life of the soul... |
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