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tracie66
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0 posted 2012-01-04 04:24 AM




from that moment
that moment of anticipated excitement
when our bodies come together
and our lips slowly melt in silken essence
my soul radiates blooms of mellifluous notes
as my heart pounds
like the ocean crashing on the shore
from that moment
that moment filled with anticipation and excitement
I'm transported into a world of silken essence
we slowly blend into one
and as I inhale the soft elixir
that you produce with every movement
for a time we are the alchemists
pure blend of ecstasy



Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



© Copyright 2012 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2012-01-04 04:43 AM


Very lovely in its sensuousness, dear Tracie Maree. Your words conveyed most beautiful blending of hearts.

Margherita

tracie66
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2 posted 2012-01-04 05:02 AM


Dear Margherita
as usual you delight me with your lovely comments and I thank you for reading and I'm pleased you enjoyed


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Klassy Lassy
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3 posted 2012-01-04 05:11 AM


Silken essence. Such moments to slip into when the night is tender and arm hold all the stars of ones heart.  Lovely.  
tracie66
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4 posted 2012-01-04 05:14 AM


Klassy Lassy - thanks for your lovely reply, I'm pleased that you enjoyed this.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



ice
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5 posted 2012-01-04 06:12 AM


When you hear, and feel the sweet "mellifluous notes"
It is probably too late to turn back from
the spell of "silken essence"
But who would want to anyway?

enjoyed, Tracie...warmed me right up..considering it is 0 degrees outside, that is an accomplishment.

Nicole
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6 posted 2012-01-04 06:27 AM


This is lovely; a moment to fight the cold cold outside.  Who needs a fire?     Very nice
tracie66
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7 posted 2012-01-04 06:54 AM


Dear Ice & Nicole - happy to have warmed you both and I thank both of you for your kind comments

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



JerryPat2
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8 posted 2012-01-04 07:11 AM


"Inhale me," is a poem written by Lori, and your poem carried the image in my thoughts a little further. Beautiful and moving is these lines of love and love-making.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

tracie66
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9 posted 2012-01-04 07:21 AM


Hi JerryPat I'm so glad you enjoyed this & I've just read & commented on Lori's "Inhale Me" thanks for sending me that way as I enjoyed her write.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



bel1e
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10 posted 2012-01-04 07:39 AM


how lovely is that!

             

JerryPat2
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11 posted 2012-01-04 08:38 AM


Yes, I'm happy you read "Inhale Me," tracie66. It is a profound piece of work.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
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12 posted 2012-01-04 09:11 AM


Beautiful write, my friend. Your best so far to me.

j.

JL
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13 posted 2012-01-04 03:23 PM


"as my heart pounds
like the ocean crashing on the shore
from that moment
that moment filled with anticipation and excitement
I'm transported into a world of silken essence"

These are sentiments that warm the heart
and please the essence of human emotion.
Words, touch, and thought combined
on a weaving loom producing your
Silken Essence.
Very nice writing tracie66.
Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

tracie66
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14 posted 2012-01-05 04:18 AM


Baby Girl, Jimmy, J & JL
you have all made my day, your comments I truly appreciate very much

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

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