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Open Poetry #47

As Delightful As You

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-01-02 10:16 PM

As Delightful As You

The moon
is lighting
up my night
shining around corners
peeking through my blind
wondering what I'm
gonna do
with a woman
as delightful
as you.

JamesLee
01January
2012

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2012-01-02 10:24 PM

so lovely~*~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-01-03 06:02 AM

Nice work and leaving the reader with the same question. What, exactly, do you have in mind for the delightful woman, James?

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2012-01-03 01:43 PM

Aw, I bet you know what to do, James.
Great write.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2012-01-03 02:07 PM

Lovely Luna probably has a few ideas, indeed. Beautiful.

Michael

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2012-01-04 04:21 AM

Delightful playfulness here, dear James.

Margherita

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

6 posted 2012-01-04 05:07 AM

oh this is just delightful, I can see it now the gorgeous moon peeking through the open window - wonderfully written with delightful imagery.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

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