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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. It’s cold we’re old And don’t want To go outside The cats sit On the window sill Content at peace Perfectly comfortable Watching the cars go by What after all Is there for us to see Not seen before In some degree Enough to know No second going Will bring epiphany Or make it somehow More worthwhile So let us here Quietly by an inner fire Make a world as if all Our better dreams came true And now all there’s left For us to do is wait again For an April moon . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
That third stanza makes the reflection. Enjoyed your write. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A familiar scene! You say it very well and through your words, I hear my husband's voice ... Margherita |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I read this the other day and did not have time to reply, but I did save it. This is my favorite poem of yours that I have read. It really touches me. Alison |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all especially you Alison John . |
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