Open Poetry #47 |
December Night |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
December Night The pensive sun sets... a mystic, cloud-captured moon arrives with a roar of silence, and the frosty breath of twilight, on this Winter evening tasting of transience. Though we are but passing apparitions, like shadows wavering in the Winter wind, everyone’s 'story'… is a quintescent verse in the music of Life, a vibrant arabesque in “Deep-time’s” elegant, eternal dance! --- b. e. adams |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You dug down deep without yourself, my poetical friend, to write this soul-searching poem. "everyone’s 'story'… is a quintescent verse in the music of Life," Could not possibly been said better. A hat tip to you, Sir. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Another most enjoyable excursion into your deep philosophical ponderings in your favorite environment. So beautiful! Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like Jerry's quote and I don't think anyone could have said it better. ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Whew! How did I miss this one until now? I am so glad I found it. You must be sick to death, Bruce, of my changing my favourite poem of yours on such a regular basis, but this is my new one! Magnificent! Exquisite! Haunting! Nature and humanity in a perfect blend, as things should be! Owl |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Almost a musical writing, Bruce. It reminds of those cold, clear, moonlit, forty below nights (and days). We are gaining daylight though. Soon we will see the sun longer each day! Yay! A |
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