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When She Was Still Here
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When She Was Still Here |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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I happened upon the picture of the two of them smiling She dyed her hair then back before she broke her hip It was the look in her eye that caught mine She was there The picture was taken when she was still here LGR12/19/11 |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
What a blessing you are. Excellent write. So sweet. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I read this and know what real poetry is all about. Beautiful. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, my friend, this...is poetry, and what real poetry is all about... it is really never about us until we bring those we love into the real picture.  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I agree with Sunny. This real poetry...You can tell by the depth of it..It is sweet water from a deep mindspring.. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
JL, Jerry, Karilea, ice, I can't thank you enough for your warm and gernerous response to this piece. Found the picture last night and it brought tears to my eyes and I wrote these words. Thank you, Lori |
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