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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2011-01-25 05:15 PM

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Oh yes
You’re special

I’m special

The whole world
Is special

Every . . .
One of us
Is special

God’s going
To let us
Live forever

Hear that Pop

Somewhere
Nowhere

Missed the boat
Failed the grade

A foot short
The day late

Just didn’t
Pass muster


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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
1 posted 2011-01-25 07:19 PM

This is an awesome poem. Very thought provoking! I would love to live forever myself. I enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2011-01-26 12:41 PM

Hmmmm...A very thought provoking poem.
                                 Ida
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