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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-12-14 05:20 PM



“On a Christmas Eve Morn”
(A True Happening For Me in 2007)

The early morning chiming of the doorbell
awakens me from a slumber deep.
The front door opens and on this cloudy day
your arrival brings sunshine into the room.

I look into your eyes of blue and see stars
within the overcast morning light.
Your arduous journey has stubbled your face
and you tremble with emotion and fatigue.

Then your voice dispels the silence
and all I hear is the music of your words.
I look at all six-feet-two of you
and memories crowd for places in my heart.

Your arms wrap around me
and loneliness belongs to before today
as your love-filled voice utters,
“I love you Mom. Merry Christmas.”
*~*
NOTE: My son lives in Costa Rica

© Marcia Miller-Twiford





© Copyright 2011 Marcia Miller-Twiford - All Rights Reserved
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2011-12-14 05:34 PM


Lovely poem, Marcia. I hope you get to see your son this Christmas.
                              Ida

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2011-12-14 05:56 PM


What a marvelous Christmas story. It was very touching and I could almost see the broad smile on your face.

Merry Christmas to you and to all those you hold dear.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Balladeer
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3 posted 2011-12-14 09:43 PM


Touching with a capital YOU, Marcia...
Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2011-12-15 05:11 PM


Very beautiful and heart touching, dear Marcia!

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2011-12-17 03:48 AM


Oh, what a wonderful Christmas present, Marcia!  May you get another such present soon!

Owl

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