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Open Poetry #47

Little blue

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-12-14 02:24 AM

She had her back to the writing on the wall
with a slow drawl on the hint of winter
her legs took their wings
and ran to the field near the courtyard, next to the hot springs

She had a little dress on
with the fringes at the feet of the wind
with her blue ease
taking pictures with the blind sea

They called her little blue
little teeth at the north wind of the street
with a shed of her bangs gently touching her forehead

She touched the soft nozzle of her faucet
with the water pouring down westward of
her slender neck as she watched the sun set

Little blue

[This message has been edited by Tomer (12-14-2011 03:12 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-12-19 06:48 PM

Aww, wow this is like a fairytale, as if little blue has this magical aura surrounding her, like she is standing in the center of a snow globe.

Beautiful writing, Tomer~

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2012-01-02 02:26 PM

Thanks, Blue...happy you enjoyed. Appreciate the support. Take care

Cheers

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