Open Poetry #47 |
Bridging the Chasm |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
my emotions link the long distance chasm separating us connecting us together emotionally understanding the why of it still . . . longing sometimes grips my heart as I stand on the periphery of emotionless fact fact rips apart the wonderful world of us so I stand, sometimes, gazing into the vastness where you are where I can never be understanding and accepting is one thing wanting and desire quite another so, days like today I ache to bridge that void holding out my arms saying your name kissing your lips holding your body next to mine eh, I know, I know, I know can't merge emotion and hard-core reality can't, I understand except on days like today I stand alone thoughts, craving spiraling inside my head go through the motion see people walk that walk, talk that talk stop, reach out my hand across the chasm and somehow as I reach my hand toward the image of you I feel something warm touching my hand cyberspace-touching my lovers hand better than nothing ©December 11, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I bet you send her cyber shock wave of your own Jerry, bless your heart. Lori |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Certainly familiar with this feeling, indeed. "eh, I know, I know, I know can't merge emotion and hard-core reality" I liked that.. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I hope I do send some shock waves, Lori. Thanks for the upbeat response. <><> Appreciate the comments Nicole, and I imagine most people can more or less relate. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-12-2011 08:40 AM).] |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"eh, I know, I know, I know can't merge emotion and hard-core reality" I think one simply has to however we can in order to be human in the true sense of the word. Not easy and as we try for balance reality seems to weigh more until we add transience into the equation. Helen |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
The shortness of the equation, Helen seems to grow shorter each and every time we try to make some progress. Thank you, kind soul. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I feel something warm touching my hand cyberspace-touching my lovers hand better than nothing" Positive note for a compelling read. And that is much better than nothing. Enjoyed the read, Jerry! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you very much, JL, and I see I'll be thanking you a few more times before I get through all these comments you have done ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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