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Open Poetry #47

One Way Dream

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

0 posted 2011-12-11 09:33 PM

One Way Dream

She asked him
Do you think this will last forever?
This come and go
and in between
Do you think
it will be forever?
He said probably a
one way dream
She turned around
just in time
and found him
waiting for her
all along

__________
EML

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-12-11 09:35 PM

Sometimes our own worst fears are never realized, as this unique piece of poetry points out wonderfully . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

2 posted 2011-12-12 06:29 AM

When I read this, I came up with a couple different connotations; and I really enjoyed that. Very nice write, thank you.

Nocturnal Pulse
Member

since 2010-08-12

Posts 84
Australia

3 posted 2011-12-12 08:28 AM

I felt the same Nicole, especially after a few re-reads. Very good work : )

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2011-12-12 01:01 PM

A one way dream...hmmm, Kind of like those streets in Pasadena. (Just a little inside humor) Edna.
Ida

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2011-12-13 03:17 PM

Hi JP - Fear? What fear? I ain't got no stinking fear.
            LOL, Thank you for your comment and appreciate
            your insight.

Nicole and Nocturnal Pulse,
           Thank you for taking the time to read, I do
           appreciate your comments.

Ida - Thank you

Ms. E

            Ms. E

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2011-12-14 04:34 PM

"She turned around
just in time
and found him
waiting for her
all along"

There ya go. You just never know.
Great writing Ms. E.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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