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RainDance |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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the rain pitter-patters outside my window it has been raining forever it seems making the night wonderfully intimate this soft, relentless rain as I sit here I watch her outside in the rain wearing a simple dress saturated with the rain glued to her skin clinging, and outlined for my eyes only she leans her head back, laughing her hair comes undone she shakes it like a wild woman and wild woman she is with me my woman as wild as she wants to be we have this rapport that rain, snow, earthquakes cannot still our hearts stop the love we share for the other I sit inside watching her very personal performance arms outstretched looking straight at my window laughing forever laughing whirls around stops dancing holds her arms out toward me begins to walk toward the window I open it as if on command reaching through it I lift her wet, clinging body into my arms into my love ©December 6, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
lovely-fine 'write' ! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, secondhanddreampoet, very much. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I'm lovin your mushy stuff. This is beautiful Jerry.  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'm lovin' that you're lovin', Lori. Thanks a lot. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
very very hot very very seductive, enjoyed it |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, , for your insightful vision of the poom. Haha I do appreciate it. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely!! I felt as though I was watching... (but I turned away before I peeked onto anything too private. LOL) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, thank you suthern, for reading and commenting on my poem . . . and . . . for turning away at the right time. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow, Jerry. This is a great write. I could see her walking into your room through that window and right into your outstretched arms. Nice one, really, really nice. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, JL, I appreciate you being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nice to see your heart beating, my friend, and looking forward - nay, running I should say, leading the wind... Cool write... j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh yes, jwesley, my heart is still pumping blood and as long as that happens with regularity I look toward the good in life. Thank you much for the honor of stopping by. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I enjoyed this scenery, Jerry, who can resist the charm of a raindance like this? Beautiful! Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You're sweet, Margherita. Thank you for stopping by and commenting on my poem. I am forever appreciative. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
What a lovely candid portrait in words. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hi, Baby Girl, Thank you for your presence and your comments . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Love the rain dance, JP, very happy for you, Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, good to see you, Ms. E. Thank you for talking the time to read my work and comment. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Had to come back and say:  Happy New Year!! Hope you have a great year Jerry. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Same to you, JL. Happy New Year. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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