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Open Poetry #47

The Psychic's Journey

Just_little_Old_Me
Junior Member

since 2011-11-24

Posts 40
Roermond, The Netherlands

0 posted 2011-12-05 05:08 PM

Bereave the stars
Of their bird's eye view
This wraithlike trance
Inaural beats induced
Shreds of truth crushed
By Cerberus' jaws beneath
The floodgates open
With unjarred answers you seek
Your third eye opened
Guidance through limitless boundaries
Strength lies within the astral plane
Shielded from Pandora's Box
For feebleminded are the meek...

Like Night needs Day
Good needs Evil
I need you to be complete...

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-12-05 05:12 PM

You touched base with all of the bedeviled, I do believe, Just_little_Old_Me. I was particularly found of "Cerberus' jaws."

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2011-12-05 07:52 PM

I like your style, I like this poem.
I feel like I read it on the banks of the Styx..that is what this type of poem does to me..I am there, and you are reciting..:-)

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2011-12-06 06:26 PM

I really liked this, but would have to question if anyone is really ever "shielded" from Pandora's Box... or at least the calamity that arose from it?

Well done.

Michael

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-12-08 08:49 AM

Very impressive write, Jean-Philippe!

Excellent.

Margherita

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