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Thorned rose
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Thorned rose |
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Just_little_Old_Me Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40Roermond, The Netherlands |
Thorned rose Thy name is love Scented is your beauty Delicate, pure Your presence breaths Innocence Your Rosered petals I so passionately kiss Carefully I caress Your prickly sting A warning As droplets of red Fall like tears On the floor Taken from the longing The romance you bring Thorned rose Thy name is love For not nurtured The rose withers Like the love I feel for you... Like Night needs Day |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You are on a roll, buddy. This is so well crafted I'm a little jealous. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yep, feelin' a little green myself.  enjoyed much! Lori |
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Just_little_Old_Me Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40Roermond, The Netherlands |
Wow, that means a lot... I'm actually blushing! thanks Like Night needs Day |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
The rose resembles love in so many ways. You depict this quite well. Welcome to Passions, btw. Michael |
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