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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-12-02 11:47 AM



Looking out on
a gray and windy day
And my thoughts
are swept away
with you
Thinking of your arms
around me tight
How sweet
your kisses light
Wishing for more
than my thoughts
of you
to keep me warm

LGRĀ©12/2/11

© Copyright 2011 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2011-12-02 11:55 AM


You do know how to write these poems of your loved one, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-12-02 12:21 PM


Thank you my friend.


Lori

JL
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Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2011-12-02 01:45 PM


All mushy and squashy is good for your poetry...  
Almost sweeter than sugar, almost.
Nice one Lori.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-12-02 02:07 PM


Thanks JL, glad it wasn't too sweet for ya!
Lori

Just_little_Old_Me
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since 2011-11-24
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5 posted 2011-12-03 09:43 AM


Your poem is truly basking in the warmth of love... touching!

Like Night needs Day
Good needs Evil
I need you to be complete...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-12-03 09:45 AM


ThanK you little you!


Lori

passing shadows
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7 posted 2011-12-03 01:42 PM


sweet. I know how that is for sure!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2011-12-03 02:05 PM


passing shadows so good to see you! Thanks for the read


Lori

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2011-12-05 05:58 PM


Nice...James
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2011-12-08 08:23 AM


Hey James! Good to see you! Have a happy holly Jolly!

Lori

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