Open Poetry #47 |
best before date |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Miss, is there best before date on your kisses with cream ? and your princess’s donjons, on your meringues in the shape of whim? is there best before date on your legs of gazelle and your cheeks in cheeses, time goes by and the vinegar goes rancid my heart without potion, where are your round grapefruits your sweet apples in the toffy, I am getting tired not to taste it because surely there is best before date on your vegetables of pigeon, and on your days coated with doughnuts, will I taste it some day, Miss, the more I am afraid, the more I wait the more I wait, more I am afraid, I am afraid that there is best before date on your courtship in disappointments, on your courtship in promotion. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such an exquisitely creative poem, dear Yann. Pour toi: La pensée du jour de la part de CLES L’optimisme est une forme de courage qui donne confiance aux autres et mène au succès. (Baden-Powell). So go ahead without fear and taste! Enjoyed this much. Margherita |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
If you use a good preservative almost anything can be extended past its date but its best enjoyed in the present, enjoyed your poem, ms. e |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi yann, I think you should follow Margherita's advice. She's a very wise woman. Ida |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep to Margherita! Taste away, dear Yann. Love this! xoxoxo A |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Fascinating play on words. Enjoyed. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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