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Open Poetry #47

There Was A Time

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-11-25 12:28 PM

There was a time
I lost my mind
a long time ago
and still it may
try to sneak away
to parts unknown
but I'll not let it go
without a fight
I've come too far
to find delight

LGR(C)11/25/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-11-25 12:31 PM

your mind is yours
you control it
to do with as you please
darkness not allowed
sunshine a better day, sha

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead,--Wild

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-11-25 12:37 PM

Sometimes a mind has a mind of it's own. I'm just so happy to see where I no longer be

You are so right, we are what we think.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-11-25 12:40 PM

Oh, I realize that a mind has a mind of its on, I was just trying for positive, rather than negative in my little poem. It is a dark, slimy sink hole we slip into now and then, it is a constant battle with evil, I absolutely and truly understand, Lori.

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead,--Wild

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2011-11-25 01:08 PM

hello lori, sometimes it is so easy to lose our mind, but it is so beautiful to drive it rather than to obey it, thanks for the precious and deep write,

have a nice day

yann

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-11-25 05:30 PM

Thanks Yann, good to hear from you.

Lori

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