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Open Poetry #47

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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-11-25 07:47 AM

you unbuckled my memory
as I removed my Stacy Adams*
and shoved them deep inside
your closet, where I caught
the scent of loose dresses
and wandered into your smile
and your welcoming point of view

©November 16, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

*Back in tha day, Stacy Adams were the hip
footwear, and they still are in my opinion.

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead,--Wild

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-11-25 10:19 AM

Like your syle in this one Jerry! Very nice my friend.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-11-25 10:52 AM

Coming from you, Lori, that is indeed a compliment . . .

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead,--Wild

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