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Just_little_Old_Me
Junior Member

since 2011-11-24

Posts 40
Roermond, The Netherlands

0 posted 2011-11-24 03:49 PM

I'm sorry for all the things I did
I'm sorry for all the pain I caused
I'm sorry I wasn't there for you
I'm sorry I couldn't keep my promise
I'm sorry that I'm such a jerk
I'm sorry for so much I can't even say
I'm sorry that you feel this way
I'm sorry that I didn't do what I said I would do
I'm sorry that I can't see you smile anymore
I'm sorry I can't say to you how much I still love you
But the thing I most sorry for
Is that I hurt the one person I loved the most
And because I lost you...

[This message has been edited by Just_little_Old_Me (11-25-2011 11:56 AM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-11-24 04:02 PM

Yep. I did that. Wrote my poem about it. Maybe post it later. Maybe not.

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead,--Wild

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-11-24 04:37 PM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry!

Yes, that's the risk that we might hurt those we love most. It's a lesson to treasure.

Heartfelt first offering!

Margherita

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-11-24 10:03 PM

Welcome, Welcome!

Please check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2011-12-02 09:23 PM

I just wanted to show the others what
you started with.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-12-03 11:53 PM

Very heartfelt....ouch...Good write!

Lori

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2011-12-09 06:03 PM

Nice writing...those words that finally come when realization of loss for our actions sets in...James

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2011-12-09 06:49 PM

"But the thing I most sorry for
Is that I hurt the one person I loved the most
And because I lost you..."

Nice write.
Sad story.
The close is a killer.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

8 posted 2011-12-13 02:05 PM

Welcome to pip this poem has a lot of profound meaning for me especially at this exact point in my life! Thnx for sharing!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

9 posted 2011-12-13 02:35 PM

I'm sorry poems can be healing poems.
Heartfelt, Ms. E

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

10 posted 2011-12-26 12:17 PM

welcome to PIP! heartfelt first post, very touching indeed ~hug~ to you

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

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