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EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2011-11-22 02:53 PM

Their frames grow
sparce, moreso
in the sun's
dull reflection
when greys run
dominant

and I miss you
between the
grieving branches
that lean.

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (11-24-2011 08:49 AM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-11-22 03:13 PM

THIS is so very, very good. The subtly used is heartbreaking in its realism. Thanks for posting this , it is very special.

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead--Wilde ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-11-22 03:22 PM

I'm with Jerry. I like this very much too!

Lori

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-11-22 05:33 PM

Sadly beautiful, Emma~

So much expressed in so few words.

Excellent!!!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2011-11-22 09:46 PM

I love short poems with great impact. Bravo!
Ida

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-11-22 09:56 PM

Emotionally Penetrating, heartfelt words.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2011-12-05 02:15 AM

Beautiful writing.

A

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2011-12-05 05:29 AM

Intense and poignant, dear EmmaRose.

Love,
Margherita

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2011-12-05 08:57 AM

and I miss you
between the
grieving branches
that lean.

What a gorgeous image!

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

9 posted 2011-12-05 09:22 AM

Thank you for stopping by and letting me know you were here

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2011-12-07 08:06 PM

agreeing with all ... well done, my friend, much enjoyed.

j.

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