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JL
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0 posted 2011-11-18 04:27 PM




Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-11-18 04:46 PM


Oh JL...this is

this is...

this is going to be a
very meaningful holiday season
for the both of us...

God Bless you...

You touched me deeply with this
and the presentation alone
could have done that,
but the words did
even more.




JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-11-18 05:57 PM


Too blurry for me to read . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

suthern
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3 posted 2011-11-18 07:06 PM


This left me smiling through tears... It's incredibly beautiful!!
JL
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4 posted 2011-11-18 07:23 PM


Sunshine, Thank you!!
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Sorry Jerry.  I'll do better next time.
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Suthern, thank you sweet lady!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael
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5 posted 2011-11-19 05:42 PM


It's amazing how time softens our outlook... can teach us to hold precious what truly was precious, no matter how much pain might have been there originally.

Sorry you couldn't read this JP, there was much in the telling.

Enjoyed the change of perspective.


Michael

Margherita
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6 posted 2011-11-19 06:18 PM


Such a romantic presentation for a beautifully poignant poem, JL!

Margherita

JL
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7 posted 2011-11-19 07:58 PM


Thanks Michael.  Precious she was too.
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Margherita, thank you sweet lady!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2011-11-25 11:15 PM


Mighty fine writing...James
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