Open Poetry #47 |
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How Best to Choose Your Dilemma |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
How Best to Choose Your Dilemma quote: I am here by whim or fate By the door or by the gate My life is in His eyes, you see, My strife is only caused by thee. To make my way, step by step Matters not if free or kept My life is in His eyes, you see, My strife is only caused by thee. Was I asked to step in chain What has caused this sad refrain? In my land I braced the wind, In my hand I held my kin. By man’s greed and awesome power Lost I centuries by the hour Yet still the dilemma is blamed on me All I asked was let me be. My blood was shed before the war Now others blood is shed by score Now man’s greed and awesome power Bleeds the country its darkest hour. Now one man would cast my fate By the door or by the gate My life is in His eyes, you see My strife is only caused by thee. In the blackest light of white A man’s dilemma caused this fright But, my life is in His eyes, you see My strife was only caused by thee. ~*~ I am reposting this in memory of those who read this nearly a decade ago, poets that I will never forget, those who had encouraged me... for it matters not what color I bear, what matters is how I choose my dilemmas. (c) KRJ, orig. 8-17-02 66848 |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ah, so classically written. Perfection. Thank you for the memory and the gift. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I haven't read it, and now I have. This is well worth a number of reads, and so I will save it to return to it later. I think, Sunshine, that there are two very overbearing problems in this once great land of ours, and that is greed twice-fold. I believe that the powers-that-be are greedy for that power. I believe that the bankers and Wall Street and all those money lenders and money changers are a problem. I also believe that those who think this once great country owes them life, liberty and health benefits, free college, free everything just for being alive and breathing. I believe that those who want those more affluent to "share the wealth" are greedy in their desire to get their hands on someone else's money without doing one single thing to earn it. I've had my say. I will return, often, to read this poem of yours. You did good and I had my say. ~*~ Money cannot buy happiness but its more comfortable to cry in a Mercedes than on a bicycle ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"By man’s greed and awesome power Lost I centuries by the hour Yet still the dilemma is blamed on me All I asked was let me be." The entirety of this is awesome, this verse says a lot. We have moved away from our central most American theme, Live Free. Free from tyrannical government. Free from a restrictive and overbearing regulation driven big government. Government hands all over the business of a free people never works. Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sunshine, Truly a poem of historical significance. Glad I popped in on this, I would not have wanted to have missed it. Doc |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad you reposted this... even though the note at the end caused me to look up the original posting... and shed a few tears over names that are sorely missed. But part of them lives on... both through their own words and the words they encouraged into existence... their gifts linger. *S* I missed this first time around... and that's my loss for I could have treasured it through the years. *S* It's beautiful, K... it's powerful... and it's appreciated. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...I don't know how I missed this the first time. The title alone is filled up with poetry. You have written this time period and thought, with empathy and character. Love it! |
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