Open Poetry #47 |
Happy Birthday, Darlin' Girl |
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Happy Birthday, Darlin’ Girl One of these days, you might run across this ditty, think it’s a little pretty then realize it was for you. Happy Birthday, darlin’ girl. I’m sorry for any misunderstandings; I know peace was tried and becoming tired from fractions of inconsequential factions, the fractional piece of peace, simply disappeared. Happy birthday, darlin’ girl. But whatever actions caused the fractions, the fact is, you’re still thought of and loved and beloved, and though you will never admit to your part in this play, that’s okay, for my heart has survived, so please, accept my wishes for a Happy birthday, darlin’ girl. I will always love you. Sis ~*~ © KRJ 11-13-2011 66836 |
||
© Copyright 2011 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved | |||
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heart-rendering. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
||
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I can feel your heart in this birthday poem and I am sure your "Darlin' Girl" will feel it too, dear Karilea. Beautiful and sensitive, containing a mission. May it all work out. Love, Margherita |
||
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh boy, do I understand this, Karilea! I am so sorry for your pain and glad that you take the stance you do. In my case, it is my beloved daughter in Australia and it has gone on unabated for over 20 years. I have tried everything, but nothing works. Sadly she is determined to promote the image of a daughter (in spite of my devotion to both my children from the moment I knew I was pregnant with each of them) whose mother "wasn't there for her!" Since her (second) divorce and some years later the children being put into the custody of their father, I have as good access as possible, taking the distance between South Africa and Australia into account, to my darling grandchildren. Owl |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I’m sorry for any misunderstandings; I know peace was tried and becoming tired from fractions of inconsequential factions, the fractional piece of peace, simply disappeared. But the love continues... and is very evident in this beautiful write of wishes!! |
||
Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This is heart-wrenching K... and beautiful in it rendering. I believe the words will reach her. They're so powerful how could they not? ((hugs)) to you. Michael |
||
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
The love continues. Beautifully expressed letter of love and understanding. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
||
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |