Open Poetry #47 |
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To That Woman Who Insists On Being Beautiful |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
. I will take your smile Along with my purchased Cans of vegetables Home tonight Through it you’ll be Beside me at my desk As I review my bank accounts When on the computer monitor I determine tomorrow’s schedule Eat dinner as if by a fire I will later Look up from the book I’m reading alone in bed Gaze out the window At the falling winter snow And I will again See you there In the grocery store Haloed by incandescent light And wonder who you are . |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
They haunt us, eh? ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful. I fear you will buy more than you need in the attempt to refresh the memory of her smile. ![]() |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
this is lovely! Lori |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Reminds me of the other evening when I was with my husband and a very good looking tall drink of man walked in... definitely not from this area... I was a little amazed when my husband commented on his good looks, too... but alas, he was looking for someone else, and was from my home state, so I doubt if I will ever see him again, but his eyes, oh his eyes... will haunt my dreams for nights... ![]() Enjoyed this, John. Thank you! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wow, you said it all...James |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Makes me wonder how many people we make an impression on and never know that we have done so. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John... I read this a week or so ago.. I was touched.. so pleased that I got to read it again thanks to my Ali girl for her comment :-) I do so enjoy your writings... Bisous RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thanks everyone My world has its visits Thanks again John . |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Delightful read, John. Ida |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
DITTO, the above replies! Excellent write. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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