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DrinaLove Junior Member
since 2010-12-23
Posts 30California |
I look down & realize i havent done much All this time has passed My life i saw it all at one time I wasnt experiencing life or so I thought Love they say is long suffering I'm only 5'4 so long I cant go I go as far it will take As long it doesnt take my breath away A gasp might be fun, but panic is not Look into the eyes, the eyes of Life True love is the feeling fo Life Let the tingle inspire your path |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I am surprised this hasn't received more responses...loved the last two lines...a truth we should all hold dear...bump |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is beautiully written. I like your description of love.  When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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always4real Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31A yankee that lives in NC |
Love it...beautifully written! "Happiness is a state of your own mind!" |
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DrinaLove Junior Member
since 2010-12-23
Posts 30California |
Thnx u guys. I love life....its conquered my heart. Its my daily inspiration. "Everyone dies but not everyone lives" |
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