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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2011-11-08 01:56 PM


From time to time I'll rouse myself
out of some state of funk
and seek some downright foolishness
that I may then debunk

Today "telekinesis" is
the subject I'll address
Things may exist twixt Heav'n'Earth
beyond my wildest guess

But, none the less I'm sure enough
'bout this to take a stand
All who believe in mind control
let's see you raise my hand

© Copyright 2011 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2011-11-08 02:19 PM


When one is in control of their mind, it's a helluvvalot harder for it to be controlled by others!
You, dear doctor, are one whose mind, I am certain, is well in good control by it's owner, shall we say! lol


EA

Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2011-11-08 03:25 PM


EA,
Thanks, lol, sometimes I wonder though, if somebody else is pulling the strings, how come they haven't locked him up yet. Or, maybe they have and I just don't know it, hmmm...
Doc

JL
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3 posted 2011-11-08 04:45 PM


LOL.  You are one silly dude #1.

Maybe someday someone will give you a classic celebrity roast, as a tribute to the celebrity Moose inside you.  I bet Bullwinkle and Rocky would be there.

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael
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4 posted 2011-11-08 05:10 PM


Silly Doc, a moose doesn't have hands!  I think this contest is rigged for failure.  lol  

If you really want to impress me, try making me see the postive side of things... now that would be a worthwhile trick.

Good write, Doc.


Michael

Dr.Moose1
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5 posted 2011-11-08 07:28 PM


Ah, Michael, would that it were within my powers to do exactly that. However, I too am one of the down-trodden. Herein I try to
lift spirits, if only momentarily by whatever humble means I possess. Be well m'friend.
Doc

JL,
Thanks Bro, but, I'm getting all I want from this already. I have a few people that get the humor, and those who don't, well I guess that's their loss, or whatever. I am having fun, it's all good,
and brings me more than one smile a day. Some from what I write, some from the replies, and some from wondering what I'll come up with next, lol. Be well m'friend.
Doc

suthern
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6 posted 2011-11-09 01:47 PM


Since I can't raise your hand, I'll raise mine... and put it with the other one in applause. *S*
Dr.Moose1
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7 posted 2011-11-11 07:27 AM


suthern,
Thanks, could have sworn I replied to this earlier, must be getting feeble, lol. Taking a small bow.
Doc

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