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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-11-08 10:08 AM



Am craving something
I can’t quite put my hands on
Could you come closer

LGR©11/8/11

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-11-08 10:53 AM


Ah, we have Lori riddles this morning, eh? You do have  way of giving the mind things to think of.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-11-08 11:09 AM


Thanks Jerry, Did my poem reach out and grab you? LOL

Lori

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2011-11-08 02:31 PM


Oooo, that's very, very coy! I'd like to use that line sometime!


Linda

martiniat8
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4 posted 2011-11-08 03:57 PM


sexy
JL
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Texas, USA
5 posted 2011-11-08 04:48 PM



Careful.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael
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6 posted 2011-11-08 05:12 PM


Yup, it just got ten degrees hotter in here.

Nicely done.


Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2011-11-09 08:25 AM


Hey thanks everybody for your comments to my suggestive senyru. Your replies make it fun.  

Lori

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