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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Sumac clings the bark red as the maple tree Cottonwood yellow far as the eye can see Green still clings the weeping willow whipping in wind that bullies leaves about LGR(C)11/5/11 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
GREAT poetry claiming the fall for what it is, a beauty and a killer . . . Love this one . . . "bullies leaves about" . . . Gotta love it . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Awe... you are waay too kind Jerry. Thank you for your kind words. Lori |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just echoing Jerry's thoughts.. love the last lines.. Bisous RDB BTW: I know we haven't met before Lori, so just introducing myself here ... I'm Roniece from Sydney Australia.. :-) and so loving your work! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
With wind on my mind today, you have to know I love this!  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"whipping in wind that bullies leaves about" Wonderful write, Lori. Love that line. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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