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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-11-04 12:42 PM

your face bears an angelic look
it is your smile
that slightly impish smile
which gives you your devilish
bearing
that smile, that beguiling smile
warm and altogether pixyish
still, it
whispers of midnight fantasies
and daylight delights
oh yes, it is the mouth, the smile
giving the impression
of dark, sensuous pleasures
and fleshly longings
as the halo hoverin' o'er your head
looks down lustily and slightly tilted
even angels can be enticed

©November 1, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-11-04 12:49 PM

Jerry, sounds like you are doing the enticing...you devil!!

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-11-04 12:53 PM

Well . . . Now that you mention it . . . Thank you, Lori, for reading and commenting . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2011-11-04 12:58 PM

I really like this alot

Juli

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-11-04 01:51 PM

Thank you Juli, I appreciate your kind words.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2011-11-04 04:00 PM

Gotta be careful with them angels, JP... never know whose wrath might get stirred up. Then again, what's a mortal man to do when he sees an angel smilin on him?
Michael

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-11-04 04:46 PM

Smile back and sweep her off her feet, being careful to not damage her delicate wings. Thanks Michael . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2011-11-04 08:08 PM

Nice Jerry.
Agreeing with Michael.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2011-11-04 08:14 PM

Appreciate your input concerning my poem, JL, thanks . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

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