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Bond of Butterfly-Ocean Steel
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Bond of Butterfly-Ocean Steel |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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BOND OF BUTTERFLY-OCEAN STEEL 4 November 2011 Forest owl woman scans dark sky for her lover, sees him, softly smiles. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Roaming the skies seems to bring comfort always ... Wonderfully expressed. Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Reminds me of a first nation woman expressing her feelings.. It confirms my feelings that woman all over the world, that are in touch with their natural connectedness, are all the same, and that imitation boundries do not seperate them... Only a Forest owl woman can write like this, and yet, are not all women forest owls in one way or another? I know I ramble, please excuse that..but Something touched me deeply when I read these simple three lines. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yes, Margherita. You are so right. Thank you. I hear you, Ford, though I am not sure at all that every woman is in touch with her natural connectedness – or indeed, only women – I think that there are possibly as many men who do too - you, for example. No, I don’t excuse your rambling. I welcome it. Thank you for understanding my poem so well and relating to it. Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Ford, I see I misread what you said. I read it as all women - but you said "the" women that . . . Yes, I am sure you are right. Owl |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
I like the primal feel to this, and the aroma of the forest at night is ripe with expression |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, EmmaRose. It actually wasn't at night, but thanks anyway. Owl |
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